I chose this picture, because it reminded me of pirates and how they would travel every were to find their treasure. I find this picture very especial, because it has The moon really close to the ship and its almost going to sink down this tells me that the ship is going towards the Moon.
Interesting image and quote, Beatriz! I would have liked you to have explained them in more depth. What about the mood, the colours, the direction, the passengers on the boat? What about making a personal connection with the quote and the image - relate them to your life? You started off well but did not really make much of an impact on me as a reader here. Look again at the rubric and also re-read your text to improve the accuracy of spelling and punctuation. Please go back into the quote and source it - who said those words? This needs to be added to the title.
Interesting image and quote, Beatriz! I would have liked you to have explained them in more depth. What about the mood, the colours, the direction, the passengers on the boat? What about making a personal connection with the quote and the image - relate them to your life? You started off well but did not really make much of an impact on me as a reader here. Look again at the rubric and also re-read your text to improve the accuracy of spelling and punctuation. Please go back into the quote and source it - who said those words? This needs to be added to the title.
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